I have a band. (1 Viewer)

[тхеодоре кацзынски]

fine.sabotage it is then.

 

[Red_Dog]

Ah well One fan ,one enemy thats a good start

 

[тхеодоре кацзынски]

ill be your mark chapman
without getting caught.

 

[Red_Dog]

So should I post a song?

 

[Jerry Twig]

No

 

[ratmonkey]

I'll post a song. And a pretty awful one at that.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKtUXVL-43Y"]YouTube- Blackout Crew - Rumper Pumper[/ame]

 

[washingcattle]

I'll post a song. And a pretty awful one at that.

YouTube- Blackout Crew - Rumper Pumper

That's a fucking masterpiece.

 

[Red_Dog]

If three people say red dog is cool I'll post a link - if not i'll never post on thumped again!

 

[тхеодоре кацзынски]

j'adore le dog rouge.

 

[washingcattle]

Ich liebe den rot hund

J'adore le chien rouge

Me gusta los perro rojo

 

[тхеодоре кацзынски]

ba maith liom an madra rua.
although i think madra rua translates straight to fox...

 

[ratmonkey]

Is ea dearg an focail atá á lorg agat.
Also, unless you meant you would like rather than you like, it'd be "is maith".

 

[washingcattle]

Yeah Theodore you said " I would like the Fox"

We can all get behind that sentiment.

 

[тхеодоре кацзынски]

and thats a new sig sorted.bless my lack of irish grammar

 

[Red_Dog]

Ok Close enough here goes , early days yet. just a simply raw home recording but its a start. More will come

http://breakingtunes.com/profile/1160

 

[washingcattle]

It's too long.

 

[nooleen]

Im picturing..

i was picturing something more like this

 

[тхеодоре кацзынски]

whens the album out?

 

[Red_Dog]

It's too long.

This is the edit full version is 20 mins plus

 

[washingcattle]

Anyway I really like the melody of your song so as a reward here's my constructive criticism.

The recording doesn't suit this song. Its not big enough . The drums sound like a metronome and the guitar sounds like a cheese slicer. The main vocal is fine but I would like one very memorable hook line please. It could just be one sentence- a summing up!
I think it would suit this song to have a more dramatic recording with more atmosphere and a tastefull 'oomph' i.e. a kaleidoscope, watching the sun shine through trees from a fast train , hustle bussle , movement, a journey , happy crowds.

Now don't get upset just think about it! Its very fixable!

Swish



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