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[snap-apple]

original, engaging, thought-provoking...

none of those things. you sound like dozens of other bands out there. having said that, you ain't the worst by a long shot.

 

[broken arm]

fourth listen better than the third

 

[billygannon]

Bonzaibob... are you a dwarf?

 

[SONYMEGADRIVE]

you shoudl do a cover of 'uncle f****r' from south park the movie when you play live.

 

[Dr Winston Umbogo]

you cant sing, you cant play, you look awful.

you'll go along way.

 

[Hector Grey]

oh dear.

 

[glen]

Really growing on me I have to say. Very good.

 

[Bonzaibob]

original, engaging, thought-provoking...

none of those things. you sound like dozens of other bands out there. having said that, you ain't the worst by a long shot.

originality is soo overated.

 

[Bonzaibob]

you cant sing, you cant play, you look awful.

you'll go along way.

i'm not actually sure if this is a compliment or not

 

[Bonzaibob]

badabump, one more song up for your listening pleasure

 

[Franco]

keep on rockin' in a gulag in north ossetia.

 

[Rogue]

These tracks were recorded at our 3rd gig in The Hub last wednesday, twould be great to get some feedback so it would.

It's just some fun rock n roll!!!!!

http://artists.cpu.ie/bands/947/
www.myspace.com/kemosabemusic

glorious sun: Opening riff could do with some variation rather than just direct transposition along the chord progression. the vox are too high in the mix and the tuning's a bit dodgy in plaaces ( i know, it's live..). Too much vox in general, no breathing space.

little miss: is the singer also playing the riffs? his vocal rhythm is going all weird in places. same probs as above, too predictable, too much vox.

monkey: this one's not so bad, sounds like poison by alice cooper (a little), the riff is ok and the verse structures build naturally. That sudden rhythm change to the chorus is a bit odd though, sounds like you're unsure whether it's swing or stomp. vocal line totally fails to work with the middle-8, just tries to sing the same line over it, yuck!


too much vox, sounds like an ego trip for the singer, especially the bluesy ones where it's just the same uninteresting lyrics repeated over and over, not so offensive in the 3rd track but still not well thought out.

maybe it's fun live but it doesn't work as a listening music.

 

[clonan attack]

Hey Bonzaibob,
you should be quite grateful to Igor for such a good review. Looks like he did exactly as you requested. Granted it wasn't so positive for your band but if you dispell (and i know you havent had right of reply yet) but if you do dispell what he has to say I would recommend quitting.

However if you do take it on board, congratulations, you just accepted some fine constructive criticism and your band/singer may just get better

Regards,
Niall

 

[Bonzaibob]

all criticism is positive criticism, unless it's not constructive criticism. I shall be sharing with the band.

Bare in mind though, this was our third gig, and for me(guitarist) and the singer it was our 3rd gig ever, we haven't played live before. So these things are expected and we will learn from them.

Thanks for the comments.

 

[clive]

all criticism is positive criticism, unless it's not constructive criticism. I shall be sharing with the band.

Bare in mind though, this was our third gig, and for me(guitarist) and the singer it was our 3rd gig ever, we haven't played live before. So these things are expected and we will learn from them.

Thanks for the comments.

'scha, right. I bet you are the singer. take it on the chin son.

 

[Bonzaibob]

bet all you like..... son

 

[egg_]

Bare in mind though, this was our third gig, and for me (guitarist) and the singer it was our 3rd gig ever, we haven't played live before.

Dude, never ever make excuses. Seriously

 

[clive]

bet all you like..... son

don't get me started young fella.

 

[Corey]

Would you put a little butter on the spuds there Andre....

 

[Bonzaibob]

Dude, never ever make excuses. Seriously

What the fuck are you talking about? I'm not making excuses, i'm pointing out a pretty significant fact.