Musical Challenge to put 71 yr old father-in-laws lyrics to music. (1 Viewer)

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Ok, so,
My wans father, who is a writer and all round nice guy has, after 71 years , decided to apply his talents to writing song lyrics.

He hasn't a musical note in his head however and asked me , "would you see if any of your musical mates would be interested in this".

Seeing the collaborative fun you guys had on that christmas song made me think some of you might like to give it a go.
I know the lyrics are not necessarily an example of what you guys are actually writing/putting music to normally but I
know ye are a talented bunch of bastids.

I believe he is thinking along the lines of a trad type of thing. He grew up in Liverpool in a poor, working class, family, listen to songs like Dirty Old Town etc,.

He has said he would like the words to be clearly heard in the song , but concedes that, any kind of music / genre would still be great.
Of course, what I would love to see would be a whole bunch of different offerings right across the spectrum.

I could think of nothing cooler than presenting him with a burned cd with like a half dozen versions of his song on it.

Anyhow, you guys are the musicians , so , if anyone of you would care to take the challenge, well, that would rock!

Below are the lyrics

oh, and thanks.



War song


The granddad he knew had killed plenty of Boer.
The one that he didn’t died died in the Great War.
Still grieving the dead from not long before
They were at it again in another world war.

Still he wonders what slaughter his great granddad saw
As his life oozed away on a far foreign shore.
Left greening the grass for the enemy’s cattle
No plaque to honour his dying in battle.

As an infant he cried in his cot in a shelter.
The buildings exploding the people on fire.
Bombs reining down and families dying,
Tumult and terror in world gone haywire.

Still he wonderers what slaughter his great granddad saw
As his life oozed away on a far foreign shore.
Left greening the grass for the enemy’s cattle
No plaque to honour his dying in battle.

One brother he died in the war in Korea,
Then a village was burning in North Vietnam.
He wakes still at night in shame ridden fear.
Will the maiming and killing never be done?

Still he wonderers what slaughter his great granddad saw
As his life oozed away on a far foreign shore.
Greening the grass for the enemy’s cattle
No plaque to honour his dying in battle.

Now he’s telling his grandson of Pol Pot and Hitler
And reminding the world of Darfur.
May this child escape all the blood and the horror
And the long trail of grieving that’s war.

Still he wonders what slaughter his great granddad saw
As his life oozed away on a far foreign shore.
Greening the grass for the enemy’s cattle
No plaque to honour his dying in battle.

LYRICS BY CHRISTOPHER HORAN
 
I'm in.

Edit..guitar is in hand..it'll take me mind off me itch.Lets rock.
 
Great lyrics.Tune is solid..have it demo'd.I'll get stuck into this later.I love a nice folk song!
 
Its taken the sting outta this restless night for me.Result.A song is born.Wasnt really expecting that.
I'd record it now but I'm not in me studio.

See if the auld geezer has any love songs man.
 
See if the auld geezer has any love songs man.

He said he don't do love, only misery and death.
But then he found a love song in his files!

It's gota Johnny Cash vibe to it, I reckon.

There could be an album yet!



FIRST LOVE


In class two was a girl I loved.
Her name was Jacqueline.
Neatly tied was her shampooed hair.
Alas, my dad cut mine.


She’d tassels on her shiny shoes,
And white angora socks.
So the battered shoes on my poor feet
Failed to win my Goldylocks.


Was it my weekly slept-in shirt
That made her step away,
For clean and soapy-smelling boys
Who knew the rules of play?


Puzzled and put out, I’d turn,
Wounded to the core.
My iron-shod clogs a-ringing
On that old classroom floor.

Lyrics By Christopher Horan
 
Havent forgotten about this!Just in the middle of a project with a deadline for Thursday..but its coming!
 

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