TenRabbits
New Member
I really liked you shall know our velocity.. it just started to grip me when you realised all the bad stuff that had happened before they went travelling, which was only being hinted it earlier.
Loved the corrections too - the bit where yer man is being chased around the room by a turd.. genius. They're both fairly depressing though, in a 'real life is depressing' kind of way.
Loved the corrections too - the bit where yer man is being chased around the room by a turd.. genius. They're both fairly depressing though, in a 'real life is depressing' kind of way.