Hi all, feedback needed please on new Song/ Video? (1 Viewer)

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Forgot to mention we also used in the video 300 shotgun shells, 30 white rose's, £2000 in notes, 200 syringes, 40 glass bottles, 200 cigarettes, 20 clocks & 1 Tv :)
 

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Bressie getting in on the paint splash action too now.
 

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Any one else got any constructive criticism for me? Im trying to improve my music video making skill and your thoughts are appreciated.
Thanks
 

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Forgot to mention we also used in the video 300 shotgun shells, 30 white rose's, £2000 in notes, 200 syringes, 40 glass bottles, 200 cigarettes, 20 clocks & 1 Tv :)

Muso1070 said:
Any one else got any constructive criticism for me? Im trying to improve my music video making skill and your thoughts are appreciated.


I think you could've used that 2 grand on your video production instead of dumping it on a load of paint for no reason.
 

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Any one else got any constructive criticism for me? Im trying to improve my music video making skill and your thoughts are appreciated.
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In terms of constructive:
For me there was a disconnect between the band playing and what was happening with the stuff falling on the TV. There didn't seem to be enough of the TV stuff - like it occasionally cut away to the tv stuff from pretty static live performance footage. Like the pacing was out or something. Perhaps you could have drawn the two elements together by dropping the same things on the band - eg - feathers or money dropped on the TV - some also falls on the band afterwards, as if falling through the TV. Would have made the band shots a bit more interesting / justified. Also covering the TV with paint at the very start made it less interesting looking at the tv - would have been better to see the screen throughout, obscured by junk (you'd have to have come up with a different ending though) or even becoming more and more fucked up, and eventually the picture failing and fading you know, "Broken World" and all that....
 

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Hi Pissypants :) thanks for the constructive criticism, i do appreciate it.
Cheers
 

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